Tuesday, July 31, 2012

FUNNY STORY #2

One day, Millip, Killip, and Rillip were out on a walk and a giant ball of mice rolled right in front of them, right in the middle of their walk. Millip, Killip, and Rillip thought that that was very funny. (The giant ball of mice). The mice ball was veeeery funny because there was a whole bunch of mice (in the giant ball of mice). They were mice from New Mouse City. (Mama adds that that is a reference to the Geronimo Stilton books, which Phillip loooves).
The End.
P.S. That is a very short story.
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  1. PapaJuly 31, 2012 at 5:20 PM

    I find this a scary story. A giant ball of mice would scare Papa. I do like your stories though.
    Love, Papa

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    1. SherrieAugust 1, 2012 at 3:58 AM

      I know you don't like mice. And I know it is a scary story to you. -Phillip

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  2. NannyJuly 31, 2012 at 5:26 PM

    The giant ball of mice was surprising and it made me laugh. I couldn't wait to read your story to Papa. I'm glad Millip, Killip and Rillip went for a walk though. I'm sure they need lots of exercise living in a house made of food.
    XOXO

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    1. SherrieAugust 1, 2012 at 3:59 AM

      Yes, they did need a lot of exercise! I didn't know that it would be surprising to you. -Phillip

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  3. AnonymousAugust 1, 2012 at 9:41 AM

    I'm confused- are Killip, Rillip, and Millip boys or girls? I would really run far far away if I saw a ball of mice! Ewww! Love Raegan

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    1. SherrieAugust 3, 2012 at 1:40 PM

      They're boys! All boys. And they live with kids, boys and girls. -Phillip

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  4. AustenAugust 1, 2012 at 4:24 PM

    Sometimes I see mice when I am waiting for the subway. I say, "Eek! A mouse!" Sometimes I also see pigeons, but that's silly. Why would they take the subway when they could fly?

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    1. SherrieAugust 3, 2012 at 1:41 PM

      Eeeeeeek! I don't like mousies. Thomas loves mousies. -Phillip

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  5. BethAugust 2, 2012 at 8:51 AM

    You are a fabulous writer, Phillip. Do you think you'll ever be an illustrator too? I'd love to see what you think Millip, Killip and Rillip look like!

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    1. SherrieAugust 3, 2012 at 1:41 PM

      I am going to make pictures of them and put their pictures on my stories. -Phillip

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  6. Teresa RobesonAugust 2, 2012 at 9:03 AM

    The giant ball of mice is, indeed, very funny! I laughed out loud when I read it. :)

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    1. SherrieAugust 3, 2012 at 1:42 PM

      I know that everything is funny to my little brother, Thomas. Almost everything in the world surprises him and almost everything in the world makes him laugh. -Phillip

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